Strike Lost Angel
Posted in Uncategorized on 01/01/2010 02:54 am by admin
Strike Lost Angel
Read my book please? (link) me Whatcha Think?.
To be honest, I posted this question at least 2 times already, but would like some suggestions, comments, complaints, whatever you deem necessary:) What my story is that Andy Carson brutally struck her home, struggling to make a difference, that is, until she meets Braxton. Fearless, sexy, Angel de la Guarda. He knows it too. Braxton is to warn an incredulous Andy for his death and offers two options: to navigate your way happily through the 7 heavens or exchange your wings and become a tutor. Attracted to him by a link called "The Silver Cord, Braxton concluded an agreement with Sinclair, a fallen angel, convince lose their wings and back. Fallen. Andy find the courage to save Braxton or die trying? Http: / / www.worthyofpublishing.com/chapter.asp?chapter_ID=30551 (There are at least 9 chapters to date) if you want, tell me what you think.
You have a very nice style. Keep it up! I think I may need to be a little clearer, but not bad! Some editing is necessary, however.
Injuries happen, but it is shocking I thought Danny Manning McCray was immortal. While he was a player in basketball with a huge talent, but I talk about sustainability.
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